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- With everything that's inside of me, I wish you would be here with me. My heart is aching for your presence A whole inside..to be filled only by your essence I'll hope one day we'll get to meet, At first sight our hearts will wildly beat And the distance will be just a bad memory. Accomplishing this dream will be so sweet I already miss your voice, The warmest, softest noise To me it's like a melody, A lullaby that's meant for me You say I'm special, and I want to believe its true but if I'm special, what are you? You're pure perfection in my eyes, A perfection in HIS eyes. All I can say is: I MISS YOU. And I promise you one day we'll make it through but for now all this is just a wish, That every day I pray to come true.
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Very sweet. You have good rhythm often in the poem, and most importantly emotion. It felt real (:
You have a typo in the first stanza though: "hole" rather than "whole"
You have a typo in the first stanza though: "hole" rather than "whole"